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    Senior Member zionlocke's Avatar
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    I'm just posting a link to a new cd label I made for a job. If crits for this is allowed, please feel free to tell me what you think.

    http://www.zioncreation.com/images/2d/00018.jpg
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    It's nice, though I'm not to keen on the font used for the text.
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    I have to agree, the font used looks inappropriate and the general composition looks abit flat. Not bad, but not brilliant either.

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    the background seems a little too pronounced, if you made it a little transparent it may also help to balance it out.

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    updated, same link. I liked all your suggestions very much.
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    Script fonts are are meant to be smooth and flow, remove the spacing between the letters.

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    I have now. I didn't have time because I had to go to my class.
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    There's still masses of space around the 'P' and the 'NY' wants to be closer to the 'O'.

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    Good call. I hope I caught all the spacing problems. Note to self: Never use the font Alison again. The image has been updated again.
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    I'd like the font less bold (the top one), and more 'airy'. It looks a bit compact/fat/dense now.

    Additionally, you could increase the size of the first letter in each word (compared to the following letters).
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