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    Ok, I've been doing everyone else's websites pro-bono and freelancing for a while. To the point that I haven't had time to actually do my business website until now.

    Lest I say this is simply a logo that will reside in the header, all the same I would like some input on it. Although the upload is in jpg, my web copy is in png with transparent background.


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    The screen looks kind of cool, although the jagged edge at the base throws off the whole feel of it.

    Don't like the font, though. I don't have an alternative suggestion, unfortunately.
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    That should be easy enough to fix with a little smoothing on the line.

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    Ok, I fixed the edge on the screen shadow and filled in the bottom of the "e" in tech a bit..thoughts?

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    IMO it looks awkward. The font is a modified Arial? And the way it is laid out next to the monitor is making odd spaces. By this I mean there is a huge gap to the right of "TECH", yet "servICE" is crammed into the monitor image. I'm not a typography expert, but this is something I read on a typography article on web designer depot - you don't want your wording to create odd spaces or shapes.

    Also, your monitor is very jagged. I suggest using a basic icon instead or finding another picture. Not as flashy, but always looks good and can easily be used for print.

    http://www.iconfinder.com/icondetail...or_screen_icon

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    For the sakes of getting better with image editing, I am going to continue editing this one...thanks for the input though , I am going to retouch and change around a bit and I will repost it

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    the monitor's okay; I want to like the text but I can't.. please help.

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    I suggest that you make the monitor the same height as the text, otherwise you may end up with a sea of white space in the header. I always suggest to people they have a horizontal logo rather than a vertical one.

    I also suggest you do a Google image search on computer repair logos to get some other ideas for logos.

    Try this: http://tinyurl.com/anerv5l

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    Another suggestion
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    Quote Originally Posted by AlphaMare, post: 246070
    Another suggestion
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    liking it..


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