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    Once again... but it's different now.

    C & C appreciated as always.

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    Sorry Brak, just like the last time, it isn't showing up.
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    Um....no... I can't see www.neathdesign.com either.
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    Not bad, but I liked the image you had in the header, while I still feel that it is a little dark (the blue band). Also you have a mix of Trebuchet MS, Verdana and Arial on the site.
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    Hi

    I like it, especially the colour theme. Comments:

    1. The man's chin in the photo is blue... it seems a blue ray is coming in and it is not visible on his jumper but very clear on his chin. It looks funny

    2. I cannot see a place where you state what ACH stands for.

    3. Spacing: In general, the whole thing seems cramped up a bit. Maybe more margins and gutters would help. SOmething that definitely needs improving IMHO: You need more space under the image and the first sentence (" eCheck2000 provides echeck (electronic check) and ACH ..."). Another place where space is needed: The two point list (" 1) paperless transactions give faster posting of funds
    2) electronic return files improve processing accuracy and reduce clerical errors through increased automation.") needs more padding everywhere: Turn it into an OL if possible.

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    Thanks for the comments.
    1) Yeah... I haved an edited version on a computer that currently isn't connected to my network, and it got deleted off this computer by accident that will be resolved.

    2) Unforutnatley, all information is 100% client as he's currently re-writing the entire site. I told him this when I met with him, but apparnetly the people that use this site know what it is.. so, hey, can't stop him.

    3)Hopefully that's been resolved. Again, the 1)2) I'm not changing as he's going to be re-writing the entire content.

    Also different fonts have been changed... I always forget to check these things in non-clear type (because it looked terrible that way).
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    Looks pretty solid to me. Only thing I don't like is the gray text in the boxes on the left. They read fine on my LCD, but on my CRT they're very hard to read.

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    Thanks for pointing that out, my comp with CRT isn't on the internet (or the network) currently, so I'm relying on LCD only right now =x

    I've darkened it up, does that help?
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    I like this. It's reasonably neat and clean.

    My two very minor criticisms:

    1) The mixing of Verdana and Arial for regular text doesn't do it for me. I'd use one for headers, the other for text.

    2) The grey on the outside: could that maybe be a light blue or a lighter shade of grey? That grey's a little depressing.

    By the way, the dude with the blue chin was chewing on his pen. Never chew on your pen, kids.
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    MMMmmm, PENS.

    That text on the left is better, but the small size coupled with the color combo makes it hard to read. Could be just me, but it could be easier to read. I started reading it and didn't make it through the second sentence. Could you make it black?


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