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    Let me know what you think: Audio Snack

    NOTE: This site is NOT near completion, obviously. SOME of the links are clickable, and some aren't.. I just want a critique of the design, copy, graphics, colors, etc.

    Thanks!

    PS - Yes, I have posted an earlier version of this site, in case you noticed, but it's changed a lot and wanted a new critique..
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    It's almost there.

    The biggest issue I see you having is square versus rounded. Round out that stuff inside or do something to just get rid of the boxes alltogether (my suggestion).

    Also, get rid of that graphic at the top right, it will look better blank.. right now it's got that square versus rounded thing and a gradient that just makes it stick out all akward.

    Nice start though.
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    I agree with what Brak said. I think the design is quite nice and visually appealing. It's looking smart. But you need to decide on whether you want the rounded look (which I think looks good as long as you keen the rounded edges quite nice and small like they are now) or the square look.

    I would go for the rounded if I was you.
    Nice work,
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    Text images should be in gif format. If you use jpegs make them much smaller.

    For example:
    http://www.webzyne.net/audiosnack/top_photo.jpg is 50kb
    For example:
    http://www.zioncreation.com/images/header.jpg is 13 kb

    I agree about making the upper right blank. Starting to look good. Keep at it!
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    Senior Member splufdaddy's Avatar
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    The site does look good, I like the colors. I agree w/ what's been said, my biggest gripe is the banner, it ends akwardly on the right side.

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    I like it, looks very profesional, nothing much I'd change.

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    It's quite good! Personally i would have made the logo more musically related, and showed the girls other eye, it looks a bit too faded as is.

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    Senior Member justlivyalife's Avatar
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    Following on from what brak said, I would like the site to remain 'rounded', so I think removing or rounding the inner boxes is a good idea

    I'm not too keen on the selected nav button, it looks a little odd compared to the others.
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    I like it, it flows and the structure seems to be well done, simple. Perhaps the fading on the right side of the top graphic is a little too much but its OK.

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    I like, but the rounded corners don't show up properly in IE.

    Everything works in Firefox of course.


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