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Thread: Is it my shoes?

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    I have a personal site called: Squeaks, which is actually an online book about debt at:

    http://da.wittygal.com

    I would like feedback on it, anykind is welcome. Design, content, layout, whatever. Thanks a lot. I want to make it more useful and more attractive.

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    Junior Member wittygal1's Avatar
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    I am not asking anyone to read the whole book. In fact, I guess I posted this because I wanted it to be free but also I am a chicken **** about getting it published. Don't really have the first idea what to do about that.

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    My recomendations would be to change the alignment of the main content from Justified to Left so the word spacing is consistent. The next thing would be to remove the paragraph indents, cleaning up the appearence and effectively shifting the uneven edge to the right side of the text. (this makes it eaier for your eyes to find the next line.)

    I found the image under the text a little distracting, perhaps you could divide it off by alinging it to one of the sides then giving it some margin space so the text doesn't touch it. (see attached image.)
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