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    Please could someone offer advice/guidence on improving my site.

    The People's Novel II

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    The first thing I would do is reverse your colors, white on black is good for highlights, but tiresome on large bodies of text. Also, your buttons do not have enough contrast with the black.

    Some of the texts in the text bubbles is too close to the edges.

    Give the story a title, or at least let people create/choose one. This will also allow multiple stories to formulate concurrently.

    Any way of getting a button from the forum back to davemooney.co.uk?

    And for someone who claims to edit for grammar mistakes...?
    Shani

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    Junior Member gibberingfool's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by DCScene
    The first thing I would do is reverse your colors, white on black is good for highlights, but tiresome on large bodies of text. Also, your buttons do not have enough contrast with the black.

    Some of the texts in the text bubbles is too close to the edges.

    Give the story a title, or at least let people create/choose one. This will also allow multiple stories to formulate concurrently.

    Any way of getting a button from the forum back to davemooney.co.uk?

    And for someone who claims to edit for grammar mistakes...?
    I will work on each of your points, but I have AS exams at the moment and so it's been put on hold. I'd forgotton at the time of posting that when improvements were suggested, I'd be revising. Your suggestions are very much appreciated, though, and I will get back to it.


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