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    Senior Member kirman's Avatar
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    hey all,

    just thought id show you my finished version of firstime driving schools website... www.kirmandesign.co.uk/firstime

    what do you think? Look for bad gramma and spellins plz lol

    also... the contact form wont work yet as im waiting for the domain name for firtime and their hosting space to be sorted... also this is my first big job and i think it looks gd...

    I was going to have the kirmandesign link to my web site but as im off back in the navy on the 6th of june i wont have the time...

    so thanks for looking :-D
    Dream like you'll live forever. Live like you're gonna die 2morrow!

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    Senior Member wizdude's Avatar
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    I'd say it's very nice. Maybe change the font to arial? (don't have to...personal pref) Otherwise...nice job.



    check out my sites:

    BNSAL: www.bnsal.com
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    Senior Member rosland's Avatar
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    Hi Kirman
    (You've been around for some time now!)

    Personally, I get scared when your page opens!

    Traffic signs are jumbled together at the top banners property in a way that tells me anarchy rules!
    Not the type of thought you would think a driving school wanted to embed in a young students mind.
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    Suggestions:
    I would definately have some sort of structure in the overhead banner. I can see from your index picture, that the school in question has a word-art representation of their companys name.
    If you want to, keep it!
    However don't leave the jumble of traffic signs in the banner melt together with the company logo!!

    The way it looks now, I would definately not reccomend my daughter to dwell further into that company.

    Leave their company logo, but place it conspicuously apart from your artistic impression of road signs.

    I would also alter the all-white background. Make any sort of background/color/texture, but enable it to seperate your primary message from the standard backdrop of blankness.
    S. Rosland

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    Senior Member kirman's Avatar
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    Rosland yeh i have been about for a while now lol... I cant see why them road signs remind you of anarchy ? lol tell me how and why...

    nice hearing from u again aswel :-D
    Dream like you'll live forever. Live like you're gonna die 2morrow!

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    The roadsigns are saying anarchy because they are all at once, without a sense of organization and the user is bombarded with the at the same time and cannot focus on one thing. Chaos. Anarchy.

    Also, you should add some depth to your header so it's not so flat.

    I'm not feeling your drop shadows, they are too large and too dark.

    Other than that, it works fine. Not exactly my style, (I prefer my fonts without highlights), but not a problem either.

    And...
    When your round and when your straight check your mirrors and accelerate
    - you are = you're
    - punctuation at the end? (same goes for the two second rule message as well)
    Shani

    I have an eye for detail like you'd never believe.


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