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    jp2
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    Hey guys,

    What do you think of my site?

    www.jonwheatley.co.uk

    Thanks,
    Jon

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    Senior Member echoSwe's Avatar
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    I think it's neat.
    The detail where the small eyes follow is nice.
    Remove shadows if your can't scroll in a field.
    It works if you don't have very much text or data to give out and it's just a small description of yourself...
    Flash -> search engines?

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    jp2
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    Thanks for the reply.

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    good!

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    What's with the knife?

    The overall shape is a...? camera of sorts??

    Okay, I think over all, it's concise and organized, and I like that, but...
    - You offer services but do not provide examples of your work (logos, SEOs for a Flash site?!)
    - Scrollbars within scrollbars, it's a neat idea, but it's a lot of work to get to the content.
    - It's great that you won an award, so why not link to the site?
    - The menus come up before the intro is done, but I still have to wait for the knife to fall before I can do anything.

    Note... the link to your nature shot doesn't work.
    Shani

    I have an eye for detail like you'd never believe.

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    I think it's neat too, but the scrollbars are kinda annoying.

    Very original and "tidy" looking, but as DCScene said you have some content issues.

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    Flash is for klicking! Not for scrooling. Site is to weeny, to make feeling- it's the site of enterprise who now what they doo.
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    Senior Member echoSwe's Avatar
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    That's very nice english, indeed!
    Don't we all love people who know the grammar?
    ("Are ya sayin me english is bad? sod off, ye *****r")

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    Junior Member raish's Avatar
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    Thanks god, i don't ask u to write in latvian
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    Very well executed. Good example of the "keep it simple stupid" flash technique. I like the simple design. Could probably use a wee bit o colour. Why does only one set of eyes follow?
    Cheers, zionlocke :chinese:
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