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    HEY ALL

    LOOKING FOR SOME CRITIQUE ON THIS MOCKUP I DID. ITS FOR A COMPANY THAT RESOLES ROCK CLIMBING SHOES. ITS THE FIRST DRAFT. I DONT KNOW ABOUT THE MAIN TEXT BOX. ANY SUGEGSTIONS?

    LATA

    - its up: www.resoles.za.net

    Still just gotta do rollovers and other links. Also waiting for better before and after pics and some copy. Just wanna get some feedback.
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    Eh, I'm not into the yellow at all. Maybe change it to green, the same color as the frog, and it would match better.

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    too large text space. you'll just bore people... or arrange it in a way that the text doesnt look congested so it will have the illusion that there's not too many text in the page. ^_^

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    ANY SUGEGSTIONS?
    Don't write your messages in all uppercase.

    I agree with ionicwings, this was one of my first thoughts as well... you should try splitting the content up into maybe 2 or 3 columns as opposed to one big expanse of text. Increasing white space through the use of margins and paragraph leading is also another great way of tricking people.

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    The yellow burns.

    Change it to green, or maybe orange (bit dangerous that one).

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    I agree about the yellow. Thats what was bugging me. I'll try it in green.

    I put that text there just to show where it would be and the font. Once I get the copy and pictures I will make paragraphs with pics.

    LOL. I was doing a banner in uppercase here at work and just swopped over quick to put this up.

    thanks for all your input. What do you think of the images at the top?

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    I'd say get rid of the shoe with the glow or put it somewhere else. I'm guessing that you put it there to balance out with the frog graphic, but I think it'll look better without it (too much balance can be boring at times).

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    really? that was my favourite part!

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    I like the shoe, but I hate the glow. Also, it could be positioned lower to better integrate the content with the rest of the layout.

    And since you're asking about the header, the oval surrounding the frog is awkwardly cropped. Also, it's isolated and framed instead of being part of the design.

    The climbers are fine with me, and the grid lines as well.
    Shani

    I have an eye for detail like you'd never believe.

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    okay which green?
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