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    I am making a website to hopefully increase sells. Tell me what you think of it so far.
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    I am a 13 year old graphics designer. I would love to make anyone who requests a logo for a price that we can discuss. I have taught myself how to make graphics. I made the winning entry for WebScalpel.com.

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    I like what you've got...one suggestion would be to make the loop you have around the sphere smaller, it takes up alot of room right now.
    Also, try moving the sphere over a little, so you can take the line that runs the length of the page and move it left a little, so it takes up less real estate. I am assuming that will be a margin and all text will be to the right of that line, so the margin doesn't need to be as big as it is.
    Two typing corrections I'd add:
    ProfessionAL logo design
    and you have about me and contact us right next to each other. Change it maybe to just Contact, because you mention ME and US right next to each other. Other than that, looks nice.
    Let me know if you need help slicing it when you get it finalized. I'd be glad to slice it for you.

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    I propbably will need you to slice it. One prob though... Moving the big circle thing will mess up my bar. I am gonna see other feedback first.
    I am a 13 year old graphics designer. I would love to make anyone who requests a logo for a price that we can discuss. I have taught myself how to make graphics. I made the winning entry for WebScalpel.com.

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    Very nice. I just wouldnt make it wider than 780 though, because it will make a horizontal scroll bar then when its not really necisary(sp?)
    But i think the big circle should stay that size. it takes up space well and has a nice look to it.
    Oh and maybe get a new name lol.

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    i think it looks nice. Nice and clean. Very nice.
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    The only thing I would do to it is lose the vertical line and allow text to appear there instead (or at least a submenu.) Otherwise you're going to have a big gap of white space that'll look kind of silly. The other option would be to colour it in with a light colour, but that wouldn't be much better.

    Other than that, I like it.
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    man... I sure wish these were my interests when I was 13 instead of running the streets like an idiot every free minute I had.. lol.

    anyway.. to the point..

    I like what you have so far but it needs more work obviously..

    I think your blue should be a little darker and the text on the navigation white so it creates a nice contrast.

    the logo should definately be smaller and possibly the lines on it could have a different color than the blue.. I would suggest #CCCCCC or something gray..... with the 2 main lines that start your navigation on the right and left border would have the same blue as the one you pick for navigation..

    Also.. I'm not sure what font you are using... but try Verdana.. Capitals.. Size 10 or 12....

    One last thing.. the nav part doesnt really flow with the rest with the curve on the left.. try to think about that part a little more..

    hope this helps..

    overall good work buddy.. keep it up.. I get very excited when little guys like you dig this stuff.. keep us updated on your work

    later

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    Dang, where is transio when you need him? I love that he does some stuff his way and gives everyone ideas. C'mon transio, fix my layout lol.
    I am a 13 year old graphics designer. I would love to make anyone who requests a logo for a price that we can discuss. I have taught myself how to make graphics. I made the winning entry for WebScalpel.com.

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    Ok, you asked for it....

    Here's the best i could do for ya:

    GFX Website

    I attached the slices and html as a zip file

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    I think you need to tweak the design a little.... ivcho and game make some good points.

    Nonetheless, i think it's an awesome design.

    Take a look at the HTML I gave ya just to get an idea of how I would put it together. There are 10s of other ways to do it, though, and still make it look good. You should play around with the HTML and slices yourself and see what you come up with.



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