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    This is my layout for my skateboarding movie homepage, before I go any further, Ide like to have some suggestions, thanks.

    --broken link-- sorry about that, will fix it ASAP, as soon as I upload mroe files and fix my mistakes

    Ok, here is the basic idea. I am open to critisization.

    http://www.geocities.com/damndanes/home.htm <--

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    messed up on the seasons, when you put your mouse over the dropdown menu, it should turn black instead of white, but you get the idea

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    Looks nice zero, here's a few suggestions:

    1. I like the banner, it looks cool. I think sharpening the text you have in there may make it look better. Keep it the color you have, because it matches the other colors you have in the banner. That is, unless the text color is white and it looks darker because it's blurred alot.

    2. I like the mouseovers, but they're hard to read. Consider changing the text's color to white, or something else upon mouseover.

    3. The seasons button is a different color, but that may be by design. Also, I'll hold off commenting on the drop down menu, because that still seems to be in progress.

    No major problems with it zero, I like what you have so far. Keep us posted w/ updates!

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    new

    Added a few new things, and fixed all of the buttons in the navigation, and the drop down menu is much better. I made a little better layout that fills the screen a bit more. The middle is a bit wordy, but it was just to get it up and show what Ive done so far, not the best, but I impressed myself. ok, time for the naked truth, how is it.

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    The "For the Love" text is brigher, i'd keep going and make the R.I. Skateboarding text in the banner the same style, just to see what it looks like. May be a keeper, may not.

    Also, the dropdown menus are hard to catch. The menu appears in the middle of two buttons, and it took me a few tries before the menu stayed down when I moved my mouse off the button and down on the menu.

    I like the text box you have, unless you have more plans for the right side of the page, expand the text box all the way right.

    I like the banner and nav that you have, it looks really cool. The mouseover text is still hard to read, but otherwise, looks good.

    You're makin progress, keep at it! Also, listen to what others have to say...contrary to the title under my name, I'm not God! just someone offering constructive criticism.

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    Yeah, I took it down since I am soon uploading the updated version, ill put it up around 5 PM EST.

    just adjusting some suggestions.

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    ok

    ust fixed it up a bit going by your suggestions

    The text box is a little better, the left side has a cleaner look, and the "seasons" mouse-over dropdown menu stays longer.

    Anything else I can do, let me know!

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    you should have text for the main text, its quicker and can be seen by search engines :classic: other than that it is good, apart from the triangles on the left side are a bit fuzzy
    JR

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    I agree w/ jraven...
    The dropdown is better, only thing that would improve it now would be lining it up with the word seasons.


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