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    Member Yani's Avatar
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    http://www.angelfire.com/wy2/wy25
    Thanks people! All suggestions and comments... good or bad are more than welcome.

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    Well I like it. Its nice and simple, im not a pro as many here now, but I am good at offering advice.

    1) Make it so it fits on all one page, and so there isnt the horizontal scroll bar.

    2) It would be cool if you added a mouse-over effect to your grey links, like so when you put your mouse over them they turn black. (CSS involved there)

    3)--erm well thats about it.

    Nice

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    Yeah, I did think the links needed an extra something. Thanks!
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    Change your font from Times New Romam. Your banner's text doesn't look good either. Also, change your banner, it just looks like a big button, you might want to make it more interesting. You also have spaces between some of the borders on the left side of the page.

    Try to get a color scheme. Most people including me don't really like the black and white color scheme. Your banner has color though, so it doesn't match the rest of the site. Maybe you should try some of the blues that are in the banner.
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    I agree that the site it too wide, unless you are not designing for the 800x600 crowd. If you want the page not to scroll horizontally, make the page 780 pixels wide (the vertical scroll bar takes up 20 pixels).

    I'm not a fan of the gray text on the white background. It's kinda hard to read.

    I also agree that your banner looks like a button, and it looks kinda weird. If you make a new banner, try to add some color, and make the banner match a color scheme you'll use on the site. It could use a little more color.

    Also, on your portfolio: instead of a screen shot, it would be cool if you linked to the actual sites you've done. If that's not possible, than atleast link the thumbnails to a page where you describe what you did on each project.

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    Yess, i think you should add a description of all your projects.

    The banner does look like a giant button, and the text looks like it was scralled onto it.

    I think the color scheme is fine, but the site is too wide, like Spluffy(mind if a i call you spluffy?=P) said.
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    Thanks for all the feedback folks! LOL! 1 person liked it. I wanted the banner to look like a buttun... dunno... maybe I thought i was being clever. I'll try to sort out the width straight away, I wasn't think ing 800x600 at the time.. sorry folks!!

    Thanks again xxx
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    Ok, I've made a few wee changes including the size and color of the text. xxx
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    Maybe the black font is better for your site! and also the color of your link too bright.Better to make it darker. Try to make your banner more interesting not just only a a big button like that.

    Other things,cool! i like your color scheme and that button is my favorite.
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    Erm... any ideas as to what I could do with the button? I gotta say I appreciate this very much, you guys are so much help!

    Thanks xxx
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