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[jemjem]

hi to all! can you give me some comments and suggestions about my site? www.tongits.tk. thank you!

[jemjem]

please please please i need it badly. it would really help me! thanks a lot!

[planetgman]

I'm not sure if this is a serious post or not. Normally, I would start off saying what is good about the site and then about how it might be improved.
However, this site needs to be completed before giving it any kind of review.
First, the intro page just sits there (of course, designers and experienced web users know to click on the welcome text). But, you are not catering to your audience (who may not be as experienced).
Also, when you do go into the site. I have always found mouse trails to be VERY annoying. Combine that with the Queen card distortion, the lack of links (you only have a home button) and then it goes into a 3rd page before you see content...........
Get rid of the welcome intro page, then get rid of the "home page" that comes up next. Make the 3rd page (when you click on the home button) your home page. Get rid of the mouse trail, get rid of the flashing thank you, get rid of the queen of hearts distorted logo (if you are going to replace it, use a better graphic).
I think if you get rid of these things, then work on colors/layout/content, then you will see your site start to come along.
Good luck......
This site needs a lot of work, so I wish you luck with it.

[jemjem]

thankz!

hey planetgman, thanks for your comment! i'll try to work on that as much as possible. im just a beginner that's why im asking for comments and opinions. thanks again!

[jemjem]

hey

ummm about the 2nd page you are talking about.. what will i put there?

[[FKN-SIK]]

hmm....

[jemjem]

hi!

oh i see you are great... =) know what, i'm looking forward to that... im so interested in web designing and my first site is www.tongits.tk. i already have my second project and its already kinda critical because its a business site.. if im already done with it i'll give you the url.. you're my idoL!

[jemjem]

hey!

i already change the design of my entire site! hope it's better than before take a look!!! :classic:

[jemjem]

me

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[echoSwe]

chill!