moonstar

[chill22]

well this is my first attempt to create a site. and i need you guys to check this link and tell me what you think about it. THANKS!

http://moonstar.hiya-host.com

[bfsog]

1: Your "no right click code" does nothing in Firefox For that to work you need to use document.oncontextmenu, and even then, I could go View -> Page Source.

2: Not really a graphical issue but your links do not have any title text.
- Same with your images. Accessibility wise not very good, as for the images screen readers would read the alt text.

Design wise quite good.

However, you should write code that validates under XHTML 1.1 not HTML 4.01

[warney]

Thats probably a good point.

Why try and block your source code, which you undoubtedly learnt from somewhere else anyway.

And the text is too small. Try and look at it at different resolutions.

[Trico]

Changing the background to a dark midnight blue or black may create the right ambience that perhaps you are trying to go for. It would feel cosier, and less 'IN YOUR FACE, BLAH!!'

It will create some contrast allowing people to focus on the nicer parts of the page, like the crescent or frilly writing and it will also be less distracting, making it easier for people to read your content.

We all love what 'Web Standards' has done/continuing to do, but the only people it is going to mildly impress are other web designers, so get that ugly road sign off your page!

I agree that it wouldn't hurt to knock the text size up a bit.

[chill22]

thanks guys! well i think i made a mistake with that right click thing code. i inserted it by mistake using Dreamweaver while im playing around with it. ill try to keep everything you said in mind the first thing to do is change the font size (thats the easiest) and remove the code.