Blind-Fate v2! ! ! !

[blindchild02]

http://www.blind-fate.com/

New version of blind-fate is now up
CHECK IT OUT!!!!
lemme know what you think

[Trico]

PROS

• I like the photos and clean styling.
• It's uncomplicated

CONS / AND POSSIBLE IMPROVEMENTS

• Your main page doesn't hit you with anything particularly interesting, visual or otherwise.
• It comes across as completely boring dull and unenthusiastic. Your 'about' page more so than others.
• Text tends to blur if the scroll bar isn't stopped in the right place.
• The size of your layout changes on every page. The switch from portrait to landscape I thought was interesting, but you could still keep the dimensions consistent in-between.
• People are more likely to care what skills and thought processes you went through to make something and why, not what software you used.
• You switch between the use of 'I' and 'we'. Do you want to come across as a small studio, or an individual? Your site is more geared towards the later at the current time.
• The white text on the blue navigation bar isn't the easiest to read; maybe reversing the static/hover states would aide legibility.
• The shying away photo doesn't come across as good as one where you'd be looking towards the camera, (your site audience.)
  People are more likely to hire a competent/confident person. Even the shadow gives the tiered impression of hiding away, even small things like this are worth taking into account.
• Don't forget to kern the letters in your own logo.

[blindchild02]

thanks for the tips, i actually thought the pic on the about page was pretty bad too, but i dont have many, ill see if i can fix some of these thanks much

[cbstudio]

I liked it. It was simple and straight to the point. The navigation could use a little work in my opinion. i don't like having to click to see the links, they should actually jump out at me.

I really like your vector graphics. Thats something I've always wished i knew how to do well.

[blindchild02]

heh, u dont have to click to see the links, u just rollover the menu :P

and thank you very much

[Fallout]

I would change the background image on your contact fields and would remove the "Menu" box to the left of the links... just have them always visible. For the first minute I looked at your site I couldn't figure out where the navigation was.