Thoughts anyone?
http://www.skywide.net/artlayout.jpg
Thoughts anyone?
http://www.skywide.net/artlayout.jpg
Hi. The paragraph is hard to read. It's easy to get lost. I would re-write thatIf you need to have such a chunk of text, increase the line spacing.
If not, try emphasizing the major sentences and words. I would embolden "Why are you here?", "website design", "logo design", "flash", and "digital art".
And don't use "blurb"![]()
Having said all this, the design is very nice. Well done!
I just put that text in as filler, I'm only interested on what people think of the design.
Well then, my comment would be "Excellent"
Just make sure you have a text alternative to the image navigation...
the narration does not work at all.hope you do something about the choice of words and introductory greetings. other than that, it looks fine to me.![]()