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  1. #1
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    Hi. The paragraph is hard to read. It's easy to get lost. I would re-write that If you need to have such a chunk of text, increase the line spacing.

    If not, try emphasizing the major sentences and words. I would embolden "Why are you here?", "website design", "logo design", "flash", and "digital art".

    And don't use "blurb"

    Having said all this, the design is very nice. Well done!
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    I just put that text in as filler, I'm only interested on what people think of the design.

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    Well then, my comment would be "Excellent"

    Just make sure you have a text alternative to the image navigation...
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  6. #5
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    the narration does not work at all.hope you do something about the choice of words and introductory greetings. other than that, it looks fine to me.


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