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Thread: Thoughts on Layout?
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Oct 02nd, 2005, 08:05 PM #1Junior Member
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Oct 02nd, 2005 08:05 PM
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Oct 03rd, 2005, 02:24 AM #2Senior Member
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Hi. The paragraph is hard to read. It's easy to get lost. I would re-write that
If you need to have such a chunk of text, increase the line spacing.
If not, try emphasizing the major sentences and words. I would embolden "Why are you here?", "website design", "logo design", "flash", and "digital art".
And don't use "blurb"
Having said all this, the design is very nice. Well done!
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Oct 03rd, 2005, 05:50 AM #3Junior Member
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I just put that text in as filler, I'm only interested on what people think of the design.
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Oct 03rd, 2005, 06:04 AM #4Senior Member
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Well then, my comment would be "Excellent"
Just make sure you have a text alternative to the image navigation...
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Oct 03rd, 2005, 01:20 PM #5Junior Member
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the narration does not work at all.hope you do something about the choice of words and introductory greetings. other than that, it looks fine to me.
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