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    Current Rating

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    please please please rate my site... thanks

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    Junior Member phleet's Avatar
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    The layout is nice, and it seems to serve a pretty good purpose.
    One suggestion: put the first paragraph of the about page on the front page.

    When I got there, I had no idea what the purpose of the site was.
    Phleetside v2: More content, less ugly
    Go to it

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    ok thanks for the advice. I'll get round to it soon as I can

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    In your flash site your text is kinda small, apart from that nice site

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    first of all, congrats on the nice url. your site is one column and has rich content. so you have to motivate me to read and scroll down. There is nothing catchy at the moment. I guess the grasspatch in the header reflects the idea of "simplicity" but would like to see more because that is your main graphic at the moment. I thought the contrast of colors between the green bg and text could be stronger because content is what u sell.

    simple and clean. keep coming.

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    ok, ill get around to some more editing and simplifying with some catchy content... move the text from the about page, change some css, setup some more scripts... easy then everyone will join my forum lol

    thanks everyone for your advice

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    Nice job! I like the color and it's layout. My only concern is the space on the sides.. so why don't you put something on it? :classic:
    ::Life is Beautiful::
    Short Run Printing

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    well on the right im going for google ads... then on the left i need some affiliates or other paid ads

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    oh the proper url is working now www.simpleurl.co.uk

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    Senior Member Shani's Avatar
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    I am not quite sure what the purpose of the site is.

    The color scheme is not working for me. But, I do not tend to like green & blue together.

    The text is feels very cluttered, try adding a line-height: 14px; to your body style. It might need 16, play with it.

    When I got to the photo section, I was able to look at your album ("The Calvin Klein Model... the model! Who lives in Penthouse A" <-forgive the tangent, any know where that line's from?) and I could get to Photos Main, but there was no navigation back to the main site. I know this area is still in progress, but, just thought you should be aware.

    Internally, you have a lot here, here, here, here, here. That's unnecessary. Simply say there's a new subdomain, and let that be the link.

    The google function is kind of cool, in theory, but my search "photo" did not match any documents.

    Content wise, the the tone is very light and familiar. It's like reading an IM conversation with all the smileys and stuff. I would not buy from this site. Try to sound more professional in your descriptions.

    Oh, and html likes when you write Gin&amp;Juice.
    Shani

    I have an eye for detail like you'd never believe.


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