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    Junior Member phaseNine's Avatar
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    For a client. any and all criticism please.
    you can see the current design at http://usskyads.com
    This is hybrid css/tables layout. feel free to check all the code.

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    First off welcome to WDF. I know you only copied the sentences from the original site, but:
    You could use better sentence and grammar structure every sentence is a run-on sentence there is no punctuation and the sentences just keep going on with one or more points sometimes three in just one run-on sentence and there is no puntuation like commas you should add some to make the sentence structure flow better the design is nice but it seems there is a bit too much white space.
    ***WOW that is the longest sentence I have ever written, but do you see my point run-on sentences suck. Short sweet and to the point.

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    Junior Member phaseNine's Avatar
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    Thanks for the tip but I do know how to write.
    If I had a choice it would be a lot different, but as anyone with numerous clients knows, you can't always have full control over everything that goes in.
    As far as the white space goes: I think ill slap some kind of light patterned background on it and maybe add something else content wise. Once its populated with all the content that's yet to be entered I think it will fill it out a bit.

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    Yeah, I'm sure we all know what that's like. I just thought you could present them with the changes. Otherwise it looks like your on your way.


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