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    Hi there buddies!

    What do you think 'bout those sites? I need your opinios or comments to improve'em...

    http://www.canalip.com
    http://www.kedius.com
    http://www.pagoporclic.com

    Thank u! See ya!
    Alex Mascarell
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    Welcome to the forums. Pretty swift sites. I'd say for the canalip site, try to make your tweens a little smoother.

    For the pagoporclic, your pop-up menus at the top cover the main menu. Try moving them down below the main menu.

    Also, is that your own business or one for a client? Cause I can tell you that pay-per-click sites don't work... ever. I've had the misfortune of working on several of those projects myself (i.e. http://www.trocamania.com which is now defunct.)

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    Alex, please reduce your signature to 4 lines.

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    The first one are the best! i like the flash work very nice! one more thing i dont know what language is that (i only know english, Vietnamese and chinese) i dont understand so i have no more comments for it. nice work.
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    It's Spanish.
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    Im asian so i never learn or contact with that language. never mind with language. This Forums just for web design.
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    Hard to critique cause of the spanish, but here goes...

    On the first site, I'm not a fan of the dark text on a dark background. Try lightening the bg and darkening the text.

    Second site, not much to say cause I have no idea what it is, but again the text isn't the easiest to read because it's small and not black, but a gray. It is better than the first one, but it could be better. (Note: It's more ledgible on my LCD than my CRT)

    On the third site, their appears to be alot of white space in the design. I'm on a 1280x1024 res, so I'm sure it looks more compact on smaller designs. Text color is good, text size is ok. Making it bigger may look better or worse, hard to tell.

    I guess when I can't read what the text says, I just anaylze how the text looks. So take my recommendations w/ that in mind

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    Hi there pals!!!

    Thank you very much for your comments!!! They're really great. Better than I expected. I've been working in those desigsn for a long time, so it's for a great honor for me, just to get such a good commets about'em.

    Now i'll take in consideration all your opinions in order to improve the designs and the functionalities too. I allready know that I'm not a good designer, but that kind of stuff helps me a lot, just to upgrade my skills.

    So, anyway! Thank you again, and try to send me back your sites, just to check'em out. I love to see new sites and new design conceptions.

    ok, See ya!

    PD: By the way, how can I change my signature? cuz I can't find the option to change it... thanx!!

    Alex Mascarell
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    Click "User CP" in the top menu, and in the "Jump to" menu select "Edit Profile". You can add your sig there.

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    Okay, since it's asked for, it's time for Game's Two Cents Canadian (or a Mexican peso carved in half):

    Canalip: Overall, not bad. I'm not crazy about all-Flash sites in general, but as they go, this is one of the better ones. I would personally change two things on it:

    1) Have an option to shut off the sound loop at the start for the user. It gets really repetitive and irritating, and it also interferes with Jimmy. Interfering with Jimmy is a cardinal sin for me, as any regulars of this board will tell you.

    2) The "mystery meat" (our team) button at the bottom right should be labelled so people know what it is. I didn't even know it was anything at all until I put my mouse over it.

    Oh wait, here's the HTML version (just discovered). I like it much more than I like the Flash version. It just seems cleaner for some reason, and the header (after the opening page) is really sharp. The only thing I'd adjust here is the white links on the black BG on the right. They're kind of hard to read.
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