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    Senior Member rjahrman's Avatar
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    I just started the design of a new site, www.uvfreemagictan.com. At the moment this is only a template (no content), but I was wondering if anyone had comments on the design of the site so far.

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    Senior Member iphong's Avatar
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    the logo is different color scheme to the whole page. It looks not good. Better to change it to blue.
    you should stretch the banner to the right to fit the page.
    Other than that nice start.
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    Looks okay... okay, no it looks like you spent 5 minutes picking colors and slapped a logo on it =/ Sorry. The text on top is rough... anti-alias it against that blue backgrounnd so it smooths out...

    Oh, and get rid of music... it's blaringly loud and annoying
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    I agree with what has been said above.

    It would take some skill, but I think a site designed with the colors in your logo could look really good. Iphong is right, your blues have nothing to do w/ the colors in your logo. However, just changing the blue to brown would probably look worse.

    The flash piece you have shouldn't loop. You have some text in there at the end, after all the pictures roll by, have the animation end with the text. Also, the last swimsuit model's picture overlaps two other pictures. If those could all be fit into the movie w/o overlapping, it would look better.

    I would highly recommend getting rid of the background music, but if you really like it, atleast add in an on/off button. When GAME comes around, he wont like your site replacing his Jimmy Buffet.

    The footer looks odd formatted the way it is, too. Maybe putting it all on one line (if it will fit) and adding | lines |inbetween | different | pieces would look better.

    The nav is pretty basic, sprucing the nav up could spruce your design up too. The site needs a little bit of eye candy to make it more attractive (besides the girls in swimsuits)

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    Bathing suits? Girls? *runs back to site*

    I can't seem to get it to work... I click the little scene button and my browser sits there eating up 100% CPU for 5 min when I gave up... (I'm using moz 1.0).
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    Senior Member splufdaddy's Avatar
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    The girls in bathing suits is a Flash 6.0 piece...the scene button your clicking on apparently goes to a high-bandwidth promo video.

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    Hmm.. in any case, I don't see any flash.
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    As far as a template goes, the overal look is Okay and the Flash Looks Good!
    I would change the Header(logo) and the Navigation bar ..

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    The website is decent enough, I only mind the colors of the logo and the rough headline.

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    Well, I've check it out. And here goes the first comment or suggestion.

    Why don't you change the icons in the bottom of the right images, with other icons selfmade. Try make a new icon for each functionality with the visual style of the whole site. No it seems that you took the icons from another interface so...



    Sorry, my english still sucks... I'm from spain, a third world country... so... It's hard for me to explain my suggestions!
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