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    Junior Member Btoxic's Avatar
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    what's up? i'm brendan, 14 years old and i just joined up. what do you think of my website: http://www.toxidity.tk

    it's my first real site, so be nice. (kidding, full criticism welcome)

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    Senior Member iphong's Avatar
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    Btoxic!
    Nice work as you could do this at 14 years old! but the site is lack of contents inside! you can put somemore content about yourself or something special for you. so your site is not so boring! not just only one page instead.
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    Senior Member iphong's Avatar
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    What like in your website is your deisgn! Goodwork! I see that your code there a small part of popup window, but i didnt see any popup ?? It seems to make your page slower to load.
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    I think he's just looking for comments on the general layout at this point, since he's gonna put content in as he goes along.

    Nice-looking site! It's got a rather interesting colour scheme too. I've never seen quite that combination before. I like it!

    The only thing I'd improve upon is your menu bar. It took me forever to figure out that I, II, III was your menu. You should label the section with a "Menu" or even better, label the links what they are.
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    Good work! I especially like the "translucent frame" look. I assume you're using a static faded background image? We had someone asking for something similar in another thread. He'd be pleased to see your site, I think!

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    The NAV is worse! nobody is gonna see it unless you show'em!
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    iono... i was looking at a lot of the sites in your ring... they're all really creative and uniquely laid out (although they are pretty difficult to navigate). I think you they're really nice for homepages, though. Who cares about navigation on a homepage? The more important thing is that it's creative and fun to be on.

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    i like your site; you colours are nice and original.

    trans is so right. the sites in the ring were very good, my personal favourite was the italianize one. the music and site were a little depressing and that, for some sick reason, attracted me.

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    thanks so much for all the compliments. yeh, italianize is an awesome site.

    i'll work on clarifying the navigation (even though i kinda like it the way it is). as for content, i draw a blank. i intended to have a blog site, but i have no idea what else to put in.

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    What's a blog site?


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