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    This is the first site i've ever made. I know it's not any good, but I would like some constructive critisizm as to how i could make it better. Thx to any who can help. The site is: www.nuiwek.bravehost.com

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    The load time is way too long (over a minute with high speed DSL!), there are 135 errors in your code, the colors you've used are too bright and don't match each other, and there is no real sense of organization or direction.
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    Don't know how i can increase speed. I cant get rid of the ads at the top cause their from my host (its free). but the rest I will work on. Thx

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    Interesting site. It's not beautiful, but the content gets the job done. It's not very slow on me... it took like 20 seconds on DSL...
    Note on code: If I give code, please note that it is simply sample code to demonstrate an effect. It is not meant to be used as-is; that is the programmer's job. I am not responsible to give you support or be held liable for anything that happens when using my code.

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    Wasn't slow for me, on cable. The content seems to hang in the middle akwardly. The grey background is a bit on the plain side.
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    all right, i've been working on the errors, but some are from my advertisers and i dont know how to fix them.
    an example of one such error:
    1. <LI class=msg_info>Info Line 138 column 113: entity was defined here.
      ...nk/redirect.asp?AID=252016314&PSTID=1&LTID=5&lang=1&startat=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%<LI class=msg_warn>Warning Line 138 column 125: reference not terminated by REFC delimiter....asp?AID=252016314&PSTID=1&LTID=5&lang=1&startat=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%2Eallposters?
      <LI class=msg_warn>Warning Line 138 column 128: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "startat"....?AID=252016314&PSTID=1&LTID=5&lan g=1&startat=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%2Eallposters%2E?
    2. Error Line 138 column 128: general entity "startat" not defined and no default entity....?AID=252016314&PSTID=1&LTID=5&lang=1&startat=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%2Eallposters%2E
    3. Any help on this issue would be greatly appreciated, thx in advance.

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    if you wanna scrap the ads scrap your host, my hosting does free services too - www.awardspace.com they're ad free i think

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    Quote Originally Posted by nuiwek
    all right, i've been working on the errors, but some are from my advertisers and i dont know how to fix them.
    an example of one such error:
    1. <LI class=msg_info>Info Line 138 column 113: entity was defined here.
      ...nk/redirect.asp?AID=252016314&PSTID=1&LTID=5&lang=1&startat=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%<LI class=msg_warn>Warning Line 138 column 125: reference not terminated by REFC delimiter....asp?AID=252016314&PSTID=1&LTID=5&lang=1&startat=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%2Eallposters?
      <LI class=msg_warn>Warning Line 138 column 128: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "startat"....?AID=252016314&PSTID=1&LTID=5&lan g=1&startat=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%2Eallposters%2E?
    2. Error Line 138 column 128: general entity "startat" not defined and no default entity....?AID=252016314&PSTID=1&LTID=5&lang=1&startat=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%2Eallposters%2E
    Every ampersand needs to be encoded, even in URLs. Change every & to &amp; if you can. Some ads don't let you change the code though, so you may be out of luck.

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    thx for all your help. I've changed the colors (don't know if it's any better than before tho)

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    you got to removes all the ads. I know some of it is from the free web hosting you got, but there are better free web hosters.
    1. awardspace
    2. 110mb


    I had some problems with awardspace, so go with 100mb.com. I think you still need better colors. Try different shades of light gray. Just clean up the design, and we'll go from there.

    Quote Originally Posted by beachkitty85
    The load time is way too long (over a minute with high speed DSL!), there are 135 errors in your code, the colors you've used are too bright and don't match each other, and there is no real sense of organization or direction.
    wow, you went striaght to the point, but they are usful tips.


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