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    Senior Member entity's Avatar
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    Really sorry for the crappy domain, but it had to suffice.

    This is my first attempt at creating a website, so...please don't go too hard on me about code and stuff.

    So...feedback?

    *NOTE: Emails links are INVALID. Thanks.
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    You talk about a logo (smiley face thing) ... but it's not anywhere to be seen.

    Also ... should your site "be different"?


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    Oops...I just took the iFrame source from another one of my sites and added it on :ichatblush: ...so there is no logo...I've got to fix that.

    How could I "be different" anyway?
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    Get some graphics going and maybe a layout that is more unusual.


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    Redesigned it. Still at same address, so just click the link.
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    A site this straightforward shouldn't have to be laid out with tables. Use XHTML and CSS. Also, you should have someone proofread your pages, as of now 1:03AM MST, there are quite a few grammatical errors, spelling errors, etc that really detract from the site.

    On the About page, lose the bit about letting someone else name your company, if you can't come up with a name you LOVE, then just use your given name. Also, you state that the "e" is cut-up, but don't say why. Also, the left edge of the "e" in your logo is cut off, I realize that it is from the "D" being cut-up, but it looks wierd.
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