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    Hey made this a couple of week ago for a beach house in south africa, have a look and tell me what u think and where i could improve on it. Thanks Thanks

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    You might work on the header, navigation and footer to make it look better.

    Quote Originally Posted by UNarmed
    Hey made this a couple of week ago for a beach house in south africa, have a look and tell me what u think and where i could improve on it. Thanks Thanks

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    The site looks nice but the masthead doesn't tell me that you are offering to rent a house - I thought it was a general tourism site for the "most southern point in Africa". Personally, I would change your slogan to incorporate something about your house rather than just describing the location. I would also try to get some form of visual of your house (part of your house) at the top - even if this is just a small pic overlying the main seascape. The left hand picture on your home page (the one with the candle-lit kitchen and sea views) might work well as a masthead pic.
    Use headings within the text to grab people's attention. Don't put "About the House" which doesn't tell me anything. For example (and please choose your own):
    Main heading (<h1>) = Rent Spacious House With Ocean Views
    Sub-heading (<h2>) = Relax in Jacuzzi
    Sub-heading (<h2>) = All Modern Comforts
    Hope this helps.

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    Yup all the input is realy great!


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