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    The link is to the old site. Attached is a mockup of our first concept. Feedback welcome!
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    I like the design, the downside is that it took me a long time to realise that this company were not selling cars.. sorry what does this company do? I just don't know. Perhaps you could make the brand message stronger?

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    Ah, yeah, well they're a gate and access control system installer. The image of the Rolls Royce is just a placeholder for what will be a video we're going to produce about their company. I know the content doesn't explain them well... it's all just dummy copy.

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    Ah ok, well that aside I really like the design.

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    I agree with Jason. A very nice looking design but I, too, thought it was something to do with selling cars. If you're going to keep the car picture (it's nice but doesn't tell me what the site does) would it be worthwhile changing the slogan around so that the key message hits you??? Something like - and obviously feel free to rephrase:
    Your Security Solution Expert
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    Alternatively, have some form of security slogan superimposed on top of the image??

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    Very nice looking design, looks like it's selling cars...basically agreeing with everyone else.

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