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    Hello one and all,

    http://www.stewarthoffman.com/socool/index.php

    This is a redesign of a site for a company that is searching for start up funding for their solar powered vehicle cooling systems.

    note: as of this posting, the contact form, and the download links are not working yet..

    Thanks.

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    I loved the visual design, the way it breaks the "box" mould. It looks really good!!
    My main criticism of the home page is that, whilst the nature pics make the environmental connection, they don't show me that your product is to do with cars. Also, the "Solar Powered Cooling" heading also doesn't make the car connection.
    Some of the back pages need a bit more spacing of the text - eg add an extra line return after each para on the Living Green page and break up some of the big paras on the About Us page. For consistency, the Living Green page should have the contact form.
    But, overall, well done!!

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    Good advice - thank you. I do have some images that would be more appropriate for the site - and I agree my text needs to be laid out a little better - thanks for the help!


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