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    Critics and review my website, tell me how can I imporve it and what have I done wrong. thanks

    3Darkness Studio
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    its coming along quite nicely. it is very clean and simple.

    the only thing i can see is that there is a gap in your tables just under your menu.

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    Could you tell me why is that? I checked my website on internet explorer / netscape and I saw what u just said....But In OPERA everything is fine. there is not gap when I view my site with opera. WHY?
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    I viewed with opera and it seem to work fine, no gap.
    Then I viewed with I.E and NETSCAPE and I see the gaps that u said. WHY?
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    Could be your tables. Make sure every image in your table has a <br> tag right after it, like so:
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    <img src="xyz.gif" /><br />
    Make sure not to put any space between the <img> and the <br>

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    Looks nice acttualy. There is that gap he was talking about. Also, I think the trasition from the eye to you title logo. grey to white should be smoother. It looks like it just cuts it off. Besides that it looks good
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    You might want the grey background on the eye to maybe fade into the white background of the text. I personally don't like to different colored images put right together without them faded into eachother an any way. I like your site layout though, very nice.
    I am a 13 year old graphics designer. I would love to make anyone who requests a logo for a price that we can discuss. I have taught myself how to make graphics. I made the winning entry for WebScalpel.com.

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    Nice design, here are a few comments:
    1. I like Supra's idea of fading the gray bg into the white in the banner. I dont like the hard line you have in there.
    2. The navigation is a little hard to read. Simply enlarging the text will probably make it easier to read but may not look good. Chaning the font, or anti-aliasing the text if it's not already are other options.
    3. I realize the name of your site is "3Darkness Studio", but the way it's written in the banner it looks like "3D arkness Studio". I think if you typed out "3Darkness" without any spaces, and then used a different font treatment for "3D", that may get the point across clearer.


    Thats about it for now, nice work!

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    The navigation is very small and would be impossible to read had I had a higher resolution on It's more than just small.. it's anti-aliased giving it a blurry effect.

    A few things that dont' matter at all:
    -your studio is called darkness, yet the website is very white.
    -don't be afraid of color like I am... liven it up!

    Good work so far though
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    I like the design alot, not a great fan of the eye though.


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