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    Pls give me some reviews and critics for this layout. It's a screenshot taken from it. I wanna know how to improve it or if it doesn't looks good at all. *also rate it pls*


    3DARKNESS STUDIO


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    hope this works...hummm

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    he image “http://www22.brinkster.com/3darkness/screenshot.jpg” cannot be displayed, because it contains errors.


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    sorry about those post...free hosting sux.....

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    here's the page with the screenshot
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    Heh.. it's all good.

    I like the start of it.. I think you might want to emphasize the "3D" as one whole more than it is now (I'm guessing your intent was to mold 3-D and Darkness into one word) Also you might want to get a slightly different font for the navigation... I like that font as the header, but I think using it for nav is a bit repetitive and takes away from the "logoness" of your title since you don't really have a logo.
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    i like it but if you are going to be a design studio then id suggest you have a more eye catching colorscheme.

    people may get bored very easily with just black and white.

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    this is what it get:

    HTTP1.1 STATUS 403 Remote Access to this object forbidden This file cannot be directly accessed from a remote site, but must be linked through the Brinkster Member's site.

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    Grandmaster, click on the link that's halfway down this thread.

    I agree with buntine, for a design studio this is a dark and uninviting color scheme. I realize the name of the studio includes "darkness", but the site seems a little dark for my tastes.

    Also, if the studio does 3D work, you may want to include something 3D on the homepage.

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    looks like something from a grunge rock band. If you lightened the design up a bit, and added some 3d work like spluf said I think you'd convey a better understanding of what the site is.

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    Layout

    I like the layout and design. I think the site would look better if you cleaned up the header "Darkness Studio". It's a little to much. But yeah looks good.

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