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    Warpspire - Please Critique

    Updated: All links should work, need to fill in screen shots and make a mailing script.

    Also what do you think of the logo? I'm fairly partial to it myself... (of course it's vector so the color doesn't really apply, just the design)

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    its coming along ok.

    suggestions:

    -im not too fond of the nav menu.
    -you can see the background on the pics in the body. so it looks a bit amature.
    -header looks good! could be better though

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    Thanks for the comments.. didn't notice about the background thing (it was kind of a quickie thing to see how it looked anyway) I've uploaded a somewhat different color scheme that I think is heading towards betterment: http://apple.uzipp.com/warpspire.com/version2/

    Although I think I need more color in the body to make the header work. Also I'm thinking about adding a little dropdown menu to change stylesheets (colors), thoughts on this?

    Any suggestions for the nav menu? I might try graphical although I'd rather stay away... Also I'm thinking of taking away the boxes and making the text free floating.. which do you thinkw ould be better?
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    i think you should leave the boxes there. i like the effect.

    i think that the yellow and orange dont look as good as the blue design. mayby you could try a slightly darker blue..

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    I don't really like the yellow and blue together. I would like to see a darker blue too, that may be better than either of the versions you have currently. Also, I agree w/ buntine about the textboxes. I like the outlines, it makes the page look neat and organized. Nice work so far.

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    Ugh... I think I was on crack when I made that 2nd one, sorry

    I've made quite a bit of work on it and should have an update for it in a few minutes.
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    i think the first one is a lot more apealing to me.... im not sure, maybe because of the colors.... i like it, but im not a huge fan of the navigation menu....
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    Okay, I've changed a lot, although most of the content is in pieces and/or testing right now. Eventually I want to be able to change color schemes (as you can see by the drop down menu) : http://apple.uzipp.com/warpspire.com/
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