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    I need your review of my page. It's a simple page; my goal is to get visitors to click on the button (link)

    I've checked this in various browsers IE,FF,Chrome, Safari, Win and Mac. If anyone could check this in Opera 10 or older that would be great! Everything validated except for line 56, however it validates in Dreamweaver, (in any event I don't know what the problem is?)

    Any advice is appreciated. B)

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    As someone who drinks quite a bit of herbal tea (I've got four different Teavana flavors in my cupboard, including the mega-awesome Samurai and Ayurvedic chai blend), I'm not averse to taking any herbal product, and I will gladly take an herb or a vitamin over a drug, given the choice. So I'm not looking at your page with a closed mind.

    The problem that I have with the page is that It does nothing to explain or even sell the product. The video is weird and vague, the copy doesn't really go into detail, the colors don't match the colors of the product bottle, and everything is just sort of...there. It's like...here's an herb that will basically perform a colon cleanse, backed by claims of weight loss that border on the outrageous (although length of time required to lose the weight isn't specified, and neither is any additional effort the "claimant" may have performed, such as an exercise regimen or change in diet). I also have to consider that testimonials can, and often are, faked.

    I could even live with all that if I could try the product...as in try it without having to buy it. The reason I'm a Teavana fan is because they set up shop in Walden Galleria Mall and let me try a sample of the tea. No pressure, no obligation, just "here, you want to try this?" "Okay." Send me a week's supply. Let me try it out. Let me see if I drop weight or more importantly inches off of my waist...although in my case, I doubt it (my waist size is 30.5") But at least let me try it and see.

    Mind you, at the price you're selling the 375 gram size for, I'd probably rather go to an indoor waterpark. I'm not even joking about that...the water pressure from the slides at an indoor waterpark actually makes a great colon cleanse.

    So you either need to pimp your product better, and go into detail as to how it works and what it can do (and lose the Youtube vid in the process), or have an actual free trial.
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    Looks like one of those frustrating spam sites that try to take money from you.
    I think that is brought about the random layout... You gotta structure the page with a more logical flow. The colors in the text don't make sense. That bright blue is usually reserved for links.
    As someone who drinks quite a bit of herbal tea (I've got four different Teavana flavors in my cupboard, including the mega-awesome Samurai and Ayurvedic chai blend)
    Your manliness just went down a bit, lol
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    Bite me. heh
    Seriously, I drink the Samurai chai before one of my long workouts or when I'm really dragging. It's healthier than one of those energy drinks and cheaper.
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    Thanks for the comments... Walden Galleria (that brings back memories) I'm originally from Buffalo

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheGAME1264, post: 212333
    Bite me. heh
    Seriously, I drink the Samurai chai before one of my long workouts or when I'm really dragging. It's healthier than one of those energy drinks and cheaper.
    I used to drink coffee before working out to give me a kick (after I came back from school). But I'll give that awesome sounding tea a shot if I see it around.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheGAME1264, post: 212312
    Mind you, at the price you're selling the 375 gram size for, I'd probably rather go to an indoor waterpark. I'm not even joking about that...the water pressure from the slides at an indoor waterpark actually makes a great colon cleanse.
    OMG - I used to love the water parks... now I'm going to worry about water quality
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    It's not the water quality...it's the pressure. Jets of water shooting up your butt through your bathing suit + hurtling down slides at about 20 MPH = * ZOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT * about 4 times in a day.
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    LOL ! Last Time I did that I guess I was heavy enough that it didn't go up my butt - but I got a helluva brain spike thru my nose! :cry:
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    I'm at hawaii, getting pummeled by waves, so it's like a waterpark. Except here, you go crashing into rocks and stuck-up surfers get mad at you after driving a surfboard through your forehead.
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