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    First website I made that's actually on the internet. Critique away people. I will say this that it's missing something. I don't know what, but it is. Any ideas, anyone?

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    You've got rouge text in top left corner of your header.
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    I would say it needs a more catchy, bolder, and more colorful header.

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    I absolutely didn't see that. How did that happen?!?!?!

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    Looks like a good start, but I don't really see where you're going with this. It's got a great set of bios of Greek gods and goddesses, but it's kind of a "so what?" thing. Nice to know, interesting, but then what do I do after 30 seconds of reading about Zeus or Aphrodite? I'm done.

    You need something, and I have no idea what that is, to allow for more interaction or have more information or something...basically, you need to bring this out more.

    Now, as far as your headers and backgrounds go, they look okay individually, but the header graphic usually clashes with the background. If anything, have one background per page and have the header sit on that background, maybe with a solid color div background for your content. There's just too much fighting of the eye going on here.

    Like I said, you've got a decent start, and at least the content in there appears to be in your own words and original (this is the big thing)...you just need to keep plugging away at it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by adammarleymtts, post: 214672
    It will look good if the header is colourful.
    Buddy, his headers couldn't be any more colorful if he dropped a bucket of Tremclad on them. What the heck are you talking about?
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheGAME1264, post: 214773
    Buddy, his headers couldn't be any more colorful if he dropped a bucket of Tremclad on them. What the heck are you talking about?
    Holla.
    Talking about headers, you might want to make them smaller, they're really pixelated.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheGAME1264, post: 214773
    Buddy, his headers couldn't be any more colorful if he dropped a bucket of Tremclad on them. What the heck are you talking about?
    as you can see by ShoveHost I enjoy making colorful websites that give people seizures :P
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    Seizures that they'll remember.
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    You only need a parachute if you plan on skydiving twice.

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    Good. Then they'll buy my hosting.
    How?
    Well it's simple:
    1. Sees website
    2. Has seizure
    3. Goes to hospital
    4. Tells doctor it was shovehost.com
    5. doctor: "oh I was looking for a good web host thanks for the recommendation"
    6. I get $$$


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