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    Have a look. Per usual, favicon and example photos aren't final. None of the links are working right now, but they will pretty soon.

    Also, if the site has a dark background with silver icons, clear your cache. I'm using the same folder as I did on another critique I posted, and it came up with the old one the first time I loaded it.

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    Dude, it's pretty awesome!
    Only thing is I find that curly green script that says Social, Why Wait, etc. is a bit hard to read. Maybe make it a lil bigger???
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    Quote Originally Posted by shovenose, post: 217535
    Dude, it's pretty awesome!
    Only thing is I find that curly green script that says Social, Why Wait, etc. is a bit hard to read. Maybe make it a lil bigger???
    Wondered about that. I'll play with it. Thanks!
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    I have no problems with it at all. Maybe add in some text on the home page explaining what the site is about, but that's not completely necessary, seeing that it's pretty obvious.
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    Now that is a professional site man. good work.
    I do agree with Shovnose though, the text at the bottom is hard to read :S
    Also with your rollovers on your menu instead of making the text underlined try making a bottom border of 3px on rollover, might add a nice effect?
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    Quote Originally Posted by George Dolidze, post: 217542
    I have no problems with it at all. Maybe add in some text on the home page explaining what the site is about, but that's not completely necessary, seeing that it's pretty obvious.
    No, you're right. I totally missed adding something explaining that it was a photographer's portfolio. It's fixed now. Clear your cache to see the changed logo.
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    Did a lot of updating. Once again, the photos are just filler. Also, the don't bother with the Prices page. The link works, but there's no content there.

    Specifically, I'd like feedback on the gallery page. I realize they're not photos, but I want to know about the layout.
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    Only problem I have is the use of courier new on the about page. Apart from that, pretty sleek site you got here. Also the home page slider could have some sort of shadow or border around it, or something like that, to take away from how square it is compared to it's surroundings.
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    again, I find nothing wrong with this. I don't know, but in my personal opinion, you should fit more pictures into a section of the gallery. That would be more convenient for viewing.
    I don't know if you knew about this, but the contact form doesn't work.
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    There will be more photos in each gallery section, and the sections will have names. I'll work on the script. Same one I always use , so I don't know why it doesn't work. Thanks.
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