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    What do you think of http://www.clangff.tk and the intro! I'm 15 and new to html but not to photoshop or flash. Please point out my weaknesses, thanks!

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    hey, welcome to WDF.

    ok, here are my thoughts:
    - the flash intro is pretty cool but it is inapropriate. Its more of a movie than an intro..
    -lighten your site up a bit.. Its too dark.
    -get rid of geocities, they suck. And also, im hell sick of seeing .tk domains! you might as well just pay for a .com or a .net
    -dark red on black is really hard to read after about 2 lines.
    -in your code, you have specified your <A> properties twice in CSS. it only needs to be done once

    overall, you have done a job considering you are new to html.

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    and also, dot TK names are soon to be illegal as 1000's of hacking/cracking sites are taking advantage of it.

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    My thoughts:
    (i dont mean to insult your work... just constructive criticism )

    1. the bomb on the "intro", the effects of it seem too simple.. more of a 'blow' would be better
    2. your counter isnt working(for me at least)
    3. Not too fond of the orange-red text backgrounds.. id say change the color of it to brighten it up the site... maybe to some lighter red. Mix it with some white or something.. ur choice.

    out of 10, i would give ur site a 6... not too appealing to the eye.
    Coming back to the intro, when u look at the overview of the field, its green, but when the sniper goes in, it turns black all of a sudden. make it realistic
    Ad space - for sale, $19.95/month

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    hahahah i like the intro. well, i used to be a hardcore starcraft player for a few years (1400-500 rec). what i'm wondering is, why bother assassinating the general if you're just gonna blow up the whole damn place? to cause a diversion or something?

    your site's fine, i guess. the dark suits it (anything bright in starcraft is rarely seen, except snow). i don't like that devil guy, though--it hurts my eyes...

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    ive never installed a game on my pc. not even pacman.
    I think are way too distracting. I would get stuck playing them all the time..

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    You dont know the half of that, I just quit the game i was playing for the past year

    I agree with Krazy for the most part

    Intro looks good, but the bomb part looks like you just rushed it a bit.
    The sites a little off on the dark color scheme, try different dark color schemes but easier on the eyes.

    Looks good though good job
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    Thanks, I'll try making the site more appealing to the eye. I was thinking about adding sound and more effects to the intro to make it look nicer. If you'd like to check my other site out <(http://www.internalid.tk)> you can but... the site is crappy 'cause it's old but the graphics are what I would like some advice on. Thanks!

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    Theres 1 entire graphic on the entire site -.- what are we supposed to be looking at besides that header?
    Jason Anderson
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    The original site you posted is too dark for my taste. There's a broken link on the homepage too.

    As for the second site you posted, the first thing I would do is center the banner. It looks weird left aligned. Also, the banner image doesn't fit in with the rest of the site at all.

    Advertising your services on GeoCities is completely useless. Everytime people click a link on your page, a hideous GeoCities ad pops up in the iFrame.

    Nice work though, keep it up.


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