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    I have just created a blog on wordpress about Chelsea. Would appreciate feedback on what you think of it. Thanks

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    Hi, I think you have a good thing going here however I do have a few words of constructive criticism. I am from Canada, so when I look at your page I'm thinking what is Chelsea? A town? A school? A university team? Also, who are you? When I go to an about page of a blog, I enjoy learning about who the writer is as a person and what drives them to blog about their specific topic. So, I would suggest rewriting your about page. I think a more personal approach will bring you more readers. A photo of yourself isn't a bad idea either. When you are rewriting your about page, keep in mind that readers will want to make a personal connection with you in order to stay interested in your posts. That's why people will prefer to read your blog over the sports section of the newspaper, your personal touch!

    Stick with it and readers will come, but you have to have something to offer them that provides a higher value then just talking about the games. You have a nice writing style, just be a little more specific and relatable and you'll have no problems!

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    Hello, Thank you for your comments. Its very much appreciated. I will have a look at re-doing the about page and make it a bit more personal. My post's at the moment are very experimental so just trying to improve them. I haven't done anything like this before so it is nice to hear some feedback

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    No problem! I believe that the smartest thing you can do these days is work online. You have all the freedom to live a great life, plus the income opportunities are endless! So props to you for getting the ball rolling. Good luck with everything!


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