kindly critic my personal site

[jexamine]

Hi guys! i need your feedback on my redesigned site. your comments will be hugely appreciated

thanks! thanks!

[Brad Grinder]

Design, colors and layout looks great. The only change I would suggest is spacing between content sections

[TheGAME1264]

First and foremost, and I can't stress this enough, get someone to proofread your site copy. I know you're from the Philippines and therefore English isn't your first language, and I'm not bothered by that...however, I'm also not in your target market. If you want to be hired, your copy needs to reflect that. If you claim you're a "frustrated writer", that means you're somewhat defeatist and/or lacking in skill. It's a skill not directly related to web design, but it gives off the wrong vibe nonetheless.

There are many other issues associated with your copy, but that should get you to have a look at it.

Second, you don't link to your client sites. You just show pictures. Link to the sites. Let people see what you did live.

Third, using Century Gothic as your body text font doesn't work the way you're doing it. Not everyone has Century Gothic, which means you should be using a font stack for people that don't. Not only that, Century Gothic is not a web-optimized font, so on computers and browsers without anti-aliasing enabled, it's going to look jagged and horrible as a result.

I know that using non-standard web fonts has gotten a bunch of designers all hot and bothered, but almost no one is thinking about how these fonts actually look in practice...and in practice, they usually look bad.

From the looks of it, you can draw some pretty pictures. You draw pretty pictures a hell of a lot better than I do. But there's a lot more to being a web designer than just drawing pretty pictures.

[DanExcell]

Okay, the displaced redneck gave you the bad, now here is the good; I'm a designer first and foremost, I am not going to read your content, I'm only interested in the presentation. On a creative front - I like the look of the site, it's different , loads pretty well and to the point. Everyone needs improvement, so take the criticism in stride. The better you become the more your value increase.

[TheGAME1264]

Hey now...I said he drew pretty pictures. That was good. His pictures are pretty. I can't draw half that well. So it wasn't all bad.