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    Hey Guys,
    I'm very new to this built my site with my partner still under some construction but mostly done. Any and all feedback will be GREATLY appreciated!

    Thanks!

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    1) Your logo isn't very appealing to me
    2) Almost never a good idea to have next shadow like on your header
    3) Never ever ever ever build a website with tables.... thats just old school. Especially with the field you want to go in. Use this site to help you learn w3schools.com
    4) No idea what the spider is supposed to represent
    5) Web site is to wide. It doesn't fit on the ****** computers at my school.
    6) Home page is text heavy and the text is too big with nothing special to it.
    7) The slideshow is too slow
    8) The colors you used are fine. But they don't look good together.
    9) In order to offer SEO first make your own site SEO. Tables DO NOT help with this...
    10) you have a link to google for a crawler??? Never a good idea to lead someone away from your site.
    11) "Join the crawler web solutions" is blocking the home link on your navigation. You shouldn't have that stationary. It moves if I zoom in and out so that is suggesting a alignment issue.
    12) Use an external css file. Make your website navigate to it. Something like this

    <LINK REL=StyleSheetHREF="css.css" TYPE="text/css" MEDIA=screen>
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    I find that spider very disturbing.
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    Thanks for the input everyone, I have redesigned the site since my first post. Its still a work in progress but let me know what you think of this homepage design.

    http://www.crawlerwebsolutions.com/home2.html

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    Quote Originally Posted by CrawlerWebSolutions, post: 226527
    Thanks for the input everyone, I have redesigned the site since my first post. Its still a work in progress but let me know what you think of this homepage design.

    http://www.crawlerwebsolutions.com/home2.html
    I like that one better =D
    im not a web designer so take evything i say as personal preference :P
    dont like somthing about the tabs (not sure what it is just dont like them XD)
    and the boxes that spin look cool but there not smooth and it has a play button that i think shouldn't be there.

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    A couple of things - why do you have so much onpage and inline styling and why are you using tables for layout in you header and footer?
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    The second page is looking much better!

    I think its a good thing you dropped the spider I agree with Mr T it was a little creepy. Perhaps you could use a illustrated/vector spider?

    Just a few things I suggest (Im new to this so don't take it to seriously)

    1) Is there a reason for the red bar at the top? Its looking a little out of place at the moment.

    2) Have a play with the color, the red is a bit heavy for me. Its prity close to primary so looks a bit dated to me.

    3) Have a play with the Type face for the body copy. Again in my opinion it looks a bit dated. (Im a bit anti serif tho haha.

    And definitely take AlphaMares advice on the styling/tables.

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    Website content text where I highlighted, fairly similar to the other website. I suppose its no big deal right?Welcome-To-Crawler-Web2-Solutions---Long-Island-Web-Design.jpg

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    That sir, is a big deal.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MYIWDesigns, post: 227658
    Website content text where I highlighted, fairly similar to the other website. I suppose its no big deal right?
    How the HELL do you find these things!
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