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    Hey guys , just tackled another inspired design ...please review.

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    Here is updated version http://creekstone.site90.net/social2.html

    the 3 duplicate iphone images will change.

    I know it might look a little too simple ,but it was what the client wanted. Client doesn't like when website scrolls

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    Honestly, I don't like it...and you know I've got mad love for your stuff. The reason I don't like it is that...well, I don't get it. What is it? What is being offered, exactly? That's on them, by the way, not you, but it looks like not much of anything is being offered and at some point Company X over there is going to supply a whole bunch of contemporary buzzwords and not much else to sound impressive.

    That means that part of what you'll need to do is make next to nothing sound like something and still keep your usual level of pretty in the design. Quite frankly, I have no idea how you're going to pull that one off.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheGAME1264, post: 235492
    Honestly, I don't like it...and you know I've got mad love for your stuff. The reason I don't like it is that...well, I don't get it. What is it? What is being offered, exactly? That's on them, by the way, not you, but it looks like not much of anything is being offered and at some point Company X over there is going to supply a whole bunch of contemporary buzzwords and not much else to sound impressive.

    That means that part of what you'll need to do is make next to nothing sound like something and still keep your usual level of pretty in the design. Quite frankly, I have no idea how you're going to pull that one off.
    LOL good point.

    They made me redo it a little . http://creekstone.site90.net/social2.html

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    If I would just review the design here I would say it looks good. The design is attractive, clear, not clattered, and you definitely established a good visual hierarchy.
    I would suggestion to refine your fold line a bit more. It looks a bit out of place, at least on my screen. The white box with the iphone image could be lowered down to make it more clean, or raised up to emphasize and prompt user to scroll and and see more. The way it is right now it's a little awkward and I don't see enough to be interested to scroll.

    Also it's not clear on what is it that I will get here or why do I need to sign up.

    Hope it helps.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MYIWDesigns, post: 235506
    LOL good point.

    They made me redo it a little . http://creekstone.site90.net/social2.html
    This looks better. You can get rid of "Protect your brand,Get your own app" line and bring bottom icons higher. I think that's more important.

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    Well, it's improved. From saying nothing, it now says kind of a vague little bit.

    It still doesn't tell me what this is. Is it an app? Is it something that monitors social media traffic by some sort of metric? Is it a mashup deal? What?

    Again, I don't hold you accountable for that. You can only work with what you're given.
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    Idk what everyone else is talking about. I like it. Nice work.
    Design inspiration is all around
    you just have to open your eyes.
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    I'm talking about the copy supplied, Eric. It doesn't make any sense and it doesn't really say much of anything. That's not design-related as such, but it has implications on what MYIW is trying to do.
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