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    Attached is a 128 colour Gif screenshot of my proposed new website.
    The links (blue) rollover to green.
    I am hoping to make the image on the right random per page load with four or five images (just need to find a script for it first)

    Please could you critique it - I WANT all comments, whether good or bad.
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    I forgot the attachment - here it is
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    Attachment?
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    It's there look up :P
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    1. Make the text in the banner easier to read.
    2. The navigation could be a little more interesting...
    3. Do not use a hotmail address, never

    Good start
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    Thanks JR - I know about the hotmail account - I'm hoping to get my parents to let me buy a domain name soon with you@yourdomain.co.uk(or.com) email thingys

    Any other feedback
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    On top of what JR said, I'm not a fan of the background. It seems a little too busy for me. Also, the content could use some cell padding to move it away from the border a little bit. Nice start though.

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    -the header is hard to read.
    -mayby you could spice up the nav a bit.
    -the BG is distracting.
    - there are some grammatical mistakes in the body text.

    so far you are doing pretty good.
    also, how come you offer your services for free? are you just trying to build a portfolio?

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    how come you offer your services for free? are you just trying to build a portfolio?
    I am just trying to build a portfolo at the moment, but I can't find anywhere information about selling and what have you. IE - are there any fees or things I have to pay to sell my services as such (I live in UK)
    Thanks for the comments people.
    there are some grammatical mistakes in the body text.
    Buntine, could you please expand on this, help would be appreciated because it doesn't look very professional.
    the BG is distracting
    Do you think I should have it just white - or perhaps use less bold colours or something?
    mayby you could spice up the nav a bit,The navigation could be a little more interesting...
    What sort of things could I do - rollovers and suchlike? (anyone got a rollover script or something that I can nab?)
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    I agree with pretyt much everyone here... Header needs to go and be just replaced I think. Also that background is gonna give people seizures at higher resolutions! IMO contrasty lines should never be used for background... or really anything. Not to mention lines can produce unforseen effects on monitors due to sub-pixel rendering...

    I'd say bump up that text and add in some flash bang wazoo!!! Haha... also, I don't know about keeping your "terms" up there... it's abit threatening from a prospective customer. Terms and Conditions belong in contracts and proposals, not advertising.
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