New Home Page Design Comments

[Tyrone]

Hi guys,

I'm entering the closing stages on designing a new home page for one of my websites, and I'd like to get some of your comments to ascertain whether I'm on the right track or wasting my time. A couple of the images still have stock watermarks, some of the text needs refinement, and the code hasn't been cleaned up yet, but please let me know if it's looking OK and what I may be able to do to make it better.

Thanks very much in advance!!

[m3n0tu18]

Hi guys,

I'm entering the closing stages on designing a new home page for one of my websites, and I'd like to get some of your comments to ascertain whether I'm on the right track or wasting my time. A couple of the images still have stock watermarks, some of the text needs refinement, and the code hasn't been cleaned up yet, but please let me know if it's looking OK and what I may be able to do to make it better.

Thanks very much in advance!!

Personally I dont really like it. It looks too lineal in my opinion. It might be a good idea to go to somewhere like TemplateMonster to get ideas (Don't copy exact designs though)

Also it would be a good idea to put your CSS in a separate style sheet instead of in the html.

-m3

[Tyrone]

Personally I dont really like it. It looks too lineal in my opinion. It might be a good idea to go to somewhere like TemplateMonster to get ideas (Don't copy exact designs though)

Also it would be a good idea to put your CSS in a separate style sheet instead of in the html.

-m3

Cheers mate. That's what I feared I would read. I clearly don't have a very good eye for design. I'm looking for something that puts an emphasis on signing up, hence the large Sign Up button, but also allows sufficient potential for explanation of the product and its various features. Do you have any links or suggestions for designs tailored to those specifications?

The CSS, etc. I'm not worried about. I was planning on doing that once I'd finalised a design.

Thanks for your input!!