Client Site: PP

[shovenose]

I'm very proud of this one!
It's not quite done yet, but I'd like some general feedback of whatever you don't like about it
Eve nit picky little crap would be highly appreciated!

The Logo is a work in progress, I didn't make it; that is somebody else's responsibility, so please don't comment on that!

[Lever]

Me like! Lots of whitespace and your copy is centre-stage. Font and size are clean, and the background is nice.

Obligatory nitpicky little crap:
- Maybe make your quoted text a little bigger and centre it
- Give your 'Try us now' link a little more love on the front page! You want people to click it after all, right? Maybe make it a little bigger, give it a border, and/or a different background color...something to draw attention to it. I didn't see it on my first visual scan of the page.

Overall, though -- really classy!

[shovenose]

thank you so much! I'll be sure to make a real call of action once the client and I agree on what to put on the home page underneath the slider

[George Dolidze]

Style the text more so the page doesn't look like an info page.

[shovenose]

Alright I'm very proud of my Magento integration Example: http://pernillaspantry.com/account/i...account/login/

[shovenose]

I made a major change on the home page. Instead of one crappy clump of text I made it neat and tidy with 3 boxes. I like it, but I'd be curious to know if other people like it too?
Thanks!

[George Dolidze]

I made a major change on the home page. Instead of one crappy clump of text I made it neat and tidy with 3 boxes. I like it, but I'd be curious to know if other people like it too?
Thanks!

Now you're getting it!

[RDesignista]

First of all, I really love the idea. Buying fresh groceries sucks sometimes. And for people with money, convenience is definitely something they will put money towards.

Second of all, I have the same complaints as I did when you made the other site (the psychologist?):
i. Text spans across the whoooooole screen.
Doing stuff like using a trio of boxes is great to make text more read-able. Others include more padding and line-height.
ii. Image optimization
The little picture of Pernilla is 160k!!!! A little picture like that should be max 25k!!!! You need to be aware of these things. I know high speed internet makes it almost an afterthought, but I honestly don't see why you can't spend 10 minutes to re-save all the images in a reasonable size. I suggest Photoshop or Photoscape.

Finally, you need to re-do the header. The text is a bit fuzzy. The slogan is a little hard to read.

-R

[shovenose]

First of all, I really love the idea. Buying fresh groceries sucks sometimes. And for people with money, convenience is definitely something they will put money towards.

Second of all, I have the same complaints as I did when you made the other site (the psychologist?):
i. Text spans across the whoooooole screen.
Doing stuff like using a trio of boxes is great to make text more read-able. Others include more padding and line-height.
ii. Image optimization
The little picture of Pernilla is 160k!!!! A little picture like that should be max 25k!!!! You need to be aware of these things. I know high speed internet makes it almost an afterthought, but I honestly don't see why you can't spend 10 minutes to re-save all the images in a reasonable size. I suggest Photoshop or Photoscape.

Finally, you need to re-do the header. The text is a bit fuzzy. The slogan is a little hard to read.

-R

Thanks fore the review.
About the test, it doesn't go all the way across on most pages. on the FAQ it does, but hey, it's an FAQ.
About the image optimization, I'm horrible at this, because I'm always at one of four places, and they have one of four internets:
-Comcast 36Mbps
-Comcast 100Mbps
-Comcast 50Mbps
-AT&T 12Mbps

See why I don't notice?
Anyway, yes, the logo is not my jurisdiction; somebody else is making that. And yes, that's not the final version.