This is an idea I have for my first ever mashup, and I've already got a couple of the pieces in place, including (pending the straightening out of a technical mixup on their end) a large and established company as a partner of sorts. I'm looking to have it done by the end of next week.
The page you're looking at isn't the final page, but a rough composite of what the final home page will look like as well as some of the content of the "about the site" page. The search box will appear over the background image on the home page (which won't appear on subpages), and the writeups will be gone for the most part. The writing is mostly there to explain the concept to prospective advertisers and people who may have some information I can use.
Basically, I'm looking for three things right now:
1) Do you get it?
2) Is there anything you can see in the writeup I may be missing that I could potentially add in as info (although I'm not really tipping much of my hand)?
3) Are there any adjustments you'd make? Thanks.