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    Hey again, I have attached a screenshot of a design for my website. Please comment, whether good or bad.

    I am going to post a few designs in this forum over the next few weeks, and hopefully,at the end of it I will create a poll so that you can vote for your favourite design (with suggested modifications.
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    If you're going to post multiple screenshots, post them in this same thread and number/name them differently. This first one is a little plain, and the nav is hidden away above the banner, which is odd. Usually the banner is at the top of the page. It doesn't always have to be, but you should have a reason if you're going against the norm, and the nav would be something you don't want to hide, I would imagine.

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    its pretty plain..
    there isnt really a design, just a header and some text..

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    I personally like the design. It's a bit plain, but on the other hand it's not distracting to the eye and it's not plain to the point where it's hideously ugly.

    My problem with your whole concept is you're giving it away too cheap. If you're going to do this as a long term business venture, either start with at a low price or indicate to your customers when you intend to change your pricing. I can understand your tack, but if you don't have a plan to make some money at it ultimately, you're going to fail at it.
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    Get rid of the hotmail address. :dead:
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    A slightly updated version of a design that I submitted to you - we'll number this one - Version 2.

    P.S. If you're gonna critique a design after this post - plz make sure that you define which one ur critiquing - thanks.
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    i think the first one was a bit better.
    Get rid of that image of 'sports pavillion' and replace it with something more eye-catching..

    You need more images.

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    The 2nd shot's top looks a little too 'cartonny' If you know what I mean, maybe put a border or something around the 'sports pavilion' image.

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    I don't like the banner, the feathered blue edge looks messy. And I agree that you need more images, the image you have looks more like a newspaper than a webpage.

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    Hi again

    I've taken into account all of yourcomments - you mayn't need all the files in the Zip - but just make sure that they are in the folder name that are there.

    Thanks, don't forget to try out the menu.
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