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    I have long wanted to get into webdesign and i studying it since 6 months back now, hoping to work with it when im done with the studies.

    Here is my second project (which is ongoing), im a perfectionist so please give me lots of feedback of both what is good and bad, I want to make great websites.

    The page isnt finished so everything might not work as intended but im mainly after critique about the design and the responsive part, it should work well down to iphone size.

    http://www.rosens-bygg.se/jesper/web...ktv2/index.php

    thanks in advance!

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    The design is OK - I can't read the text, so i don't know how it relates to the elements in the design.
    I do like the way the slider is designed, very clever.
    I will say that if this is a site for a pre-school, the top section is way too dark - try using a lighter colour or even an image of some kind.
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    The header loads, but after 20 seconds, I gave up waiting on the rest of the page to load.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Webzarus, post: 247854
    The header loads, but after 20 seconds, I gave up waiting on the rest of the page to load.
    image.jpg
    hmm sounds weird as it loads pretty fast for me, even tho im a pretty slow line in asia atm. Maby i should make the images smaller, think they are bigger then what is needed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AlphaMare, post: 247851
    The design is OK - I can't read the text, so i don't know how it relates to the elements in the design.
    I do like the way the slider is designed, very clever.
    I will say that if this is a site for a pre-school, the top section is way too dark - try using a lighter colour or even an image of some kind.
    Thanks for the feedback, and yeah u are right on the color of the header section, will try some lighter coolor or some subtle "schoollike" image.

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    I like your design and idea behind. One thing I will say is, it looks a little bare. Your header is perfect but your content is mostly all white with black writing. I would say make it a little more attractive. "Spice it up a little bit"
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    Quote Originally Posted by ReGGaeBOSS, post: 247855
    hmm sounds weird as it loads pretty fast for me, even tho im a pretty slow line in asia atm. Maby i should make the images smaller, think they are bigger then what is needed.
    I rarely do design reviews, but you were asking to test the responsive part.

    I test responsive design in real world terms ( Ie. email running, messaging running, at least 5 other apps running ), you can't test on an emulator, and test ( speed and load ), are dependant on server location and how the code / content is optimized.


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