Chellenging minimalistic web site/ Critics!

[outthere]

By this way I want to assume you guys to give me some feedbacks critics to following web design I am working on it.

http://oi48.tinypic.com/a43jav.jpg

1. Minimalistic
2. Good readable for all people including old one
3. No rolling through screen
4. Most white color, some of the elements should be red (minamal) and black color

Here is a subtitle with some overview with garment. On the background is grid which is divided whole screen to the rectangles. Previous screen is like a list with pictures (links- garments which is linked to this site I post)

But to me it seems something missing. It is still bored. Litle bit more playful feeling. If anybody has got any ideas. I will be so grateful. Need some feedback from you- experienced masters in web design!

Thanks a lot

Sites with list:
http://oi49.tinypic.com/28qpw2h.jpg

Overview with exact link:
http://oi50.tinypic.com/jj7hqt.jpg

[m3n0tu18]

Do you have a live or sub-live link so we can view it? It is better than looking at a static image.

From a static point of view you need to work on the fonts. Somethings not quite right there. Is this actually for the MOL or just something you are attempting?

[outthere]

Yes absolutely I agree, what I found out my biggest ,,fight,, is with myself- my ego and some learnt rules. Difficult sometimes to get rid of it. And agree the biggest part of design look afterwards will be text and icons. And agree I still need work with text. But! What is neccesary to keep the TIMES. Do you have any idea how to make it more playful but still readable?

[RDesignista]

Playful? Don't make it playful. It's a minimalist website for a museum.

I can see that you're trying something creative with your layout. In my opinion, it looks odd. And in the first picture, things are square up, which is important in a lot of minimalist designs, I feel.

It's hard to judge your website without seeing the actual website.

[outthere]

But still struggeling you know this feeling something still missing to me... text stylization, proper icon set... something. For that need some feedback criticism...

thanks a lot