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    HI, all.
    Review my design. This site for the iPhone apps for food shoping. Please, give me constructive feedback. Thanks.

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    Someone created an app for this? Seriously? Wow...I usually just find a cashier if I can't find a stockboy and let the cashier page the stockboy. I guess I'm in the minority.

    Not eally sure what we'r evaluating here. I'm not a fan of the idea myself, so it's hard for me to be "constructive" on those grounds. I also don't see why anyone would waste time entering in the exact location of a box of Fruity Pebbles when what they're ultimately looking to find the ribeye steak special. I'd guess that the volume of people who would want to take information would be far greater than the number of people who would want to give it.
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    Thank you for your opinion about the application, but I'm more interested in the opinions about the design of the site. By the application does not have nothing to do.

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    Well, your design is affected by the application itself, or at least the perception of the application. Your job as the designer should be to convince people to download this thing, and it does absolutely nothing to encourage me to want to do that. Basically, I don't see anything in your design that suggests why I would want to use it, other than a bunch of generalist questions and statements that encourage me to do so.

    Let me put it to you this way...I'm in a Tops. Or a Target. Or a Wal-Mart. Or wherever I am that sells groceries. How do I know that if I download your app, I'm going to find the baby Purex detergent my wife uses to wash my daughter's clothes? Or how do I know that I'm going to know where a carton of milk is? There's nothing that guarantees me or even suggests strongly that I will get what I want. There's no "how it works" link. There's no guarantee. There's nothing that's all that convincing.

    It's not just about the aesthetics of your design, and if that's all you came here looking for, you're selling both your work short and your company short. Is it aesthetically pleasing? Yeah, I guess (although that's highly subjective). But if it doesn't convince anyone to buy the app (I'm assuming you're selling this thing), then it doesn't matter.
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