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    Hi,
    I have recently put up a new design for my website TimothyMerchant.co.uk. I would like some feedback on the design (not content). Please give reasons for your criticism.:cheeky:

    TimothyMerchant.co.uk

    Thanks, Tim
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    Hi Tim, a few things you could improve on are

    1) Put a rollover effect on your links in the navigation menu
    2) Maybe spend some time in Photoshop making a more eye catching banner for the top of the page.
    3) Also it looks to me like there are some keywords possibly from a meta tag at the very bottom of the page.
    4) Your table borders are quite thick and dark. Maybe try a 1 px border.

    nice work.
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    Stephen Gilmour

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    Cheers! I see what you mean about the links there a bit plain. About the banner have you any ideas how I could make it 'eyecatching' still with the same text?

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    Sure dude, how's this?
    BANNER

    Psst. Theres 1 quarter of a border on it. It's the bottom quarter, it fits on your page quite nicely.

    Ah just remembered you said "same text" If you like the banner i could stick the old text in probably
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    wow! thats awesome! It would be good if you could slot the original text with the <?'s in but also keep that one becasue thats cool!

    much appreciated,
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    you need to get yourself rid of the huge borders, and perhaps use a less imposing blue bg on the cells. overall, quite good site.
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    Hey Tim, here's another 2 versions coming at ya.
    tim2
    tim3
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    Sirus what did you do to create them banners? They look excellent

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    For some reason, in mozilla the bg of your content cells appears black, as well as the text. Result: I can't see any text.

    Also, your date script says that today is September 32st.

    I like Sirus' banners, but I'm not sure why you want them with the <?'s in there. I think the banners look better w/o the punctuation.

    Finally, I'm not a fan of co.uk sites. Domains are $8, you should get one.

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    Kirman, just a bit of photoshop magic
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