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    Aquarium Personal Project - Critique Me :)

    Hey there, so I just got done working on a personal project of mine. For whatever reason, I just felt like making a website for an aquarium and did a 4 page mock-up (plus what happens when you hover over the homepage's Hero section).

    The footer is still unfinished, but I'll get to that soon enough. Also, I did NOT make the logo. Everything else is me though

    Critique me please!

    Here's the link to the gallery of pages:
    http://postimg.org/gallery/9cj21wfm/




    -Justin
    Last edited by JustinMueller; Feb 09th, 2014 at 08:18 AM.

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    hmmmm, i'm guessing everything is a bit too big ^.^ Feels quite bulky when looking at it in my browser. Will have to work on that ><
    Last edited by JustinMueller; Feb 09th, 2014 at 07:46 AM.

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    It's hard to evaluate based solely on pictures. Design is pictures + code + dealing with issues such as how it appears on phones, tablets, etc. So you're probably not going to get a whole lot of useful feedback just based on the screenshots.
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    Hi , the idea is good but there is too much blue ...don't you think ? Even the icons View image: PPaquarium Home Offline are partly covered with blue gradient.
    I like the logo design and the main title... but you need to make them more contrast.I also like the idea for water on the background.My advice is to make the background more bright (it looks more like Mariana Trench Park).If you make it brighter ,there will be more contrast between the BG and the logo and main title( this will work also for the icons and text and everything) And one more ... the dark blue rectangle on the bottom .. it is too dark and EMPTY.


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