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    industrial, please critique my website, thanks

    please critique my website, thanks



    what will be the changes for this one?

    this not yet done though, i need advice for this one to proceed. Thanks


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    That background makes some of the text really hard to read (at least on a cell phone)

    The background image is too small and it doesn't blend in very well with itself. You can see where the background image is tiled.

    None of your buttons do anything on my cellphone either.


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    Start over would be my best advice. Needs a better background image. The page itself needs better structure. Need to make better choices with the overall color scheme of the site. I would first do some research and look at other "nice" sites to give you an idea to work with. Here is one somewhat similar to yours BCCI Construction that is more appealing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheGAME1264 View Post


    What??? That site you listed is a template?? I don't get the connect, the OP's is far from a template.... The link I references is not a template either, so I am confused where this came from concerning what?

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    thanks for the advice

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fireproofgfx View Post
    What??? That site you listed is a template?? I don't get the connect, the OP's is far from a template.... The link I references is not a template either, so I am confused where this came from concerning what?
    He took the copy from another site (the one I linked to) and he's building "templates" of sites he thinks companies might want to buy and use from him. In other words, it's the template argument, but from the other side of the fence. He doesn't intend to build anything really useful..he just intends to build templates to sell to others.

    RJ Enterprises is his "I need to stick a company name somewhere so I'll use this name and hope no one figures it out" name.

    This is getting really old, really fast.
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    LMAO that is funny! I would never guess by looking at the two that there is any similarities, at least the other one, even though it is a template looks "OK" lol, that is more than you can say about OP's.


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