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    Hey guys!
    Coulp you please review my web site (new design).

    Professional Web Design from CreationAge
    http://www.creationage.com

    Thank you.
    Sincerely CreationAge Group.

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    Hi Crag, I'm not a webdesigner but let me point out few things I would change:


    "Each day we have more interesting ideas!"
    Something doesn't sound right. Not sure, ask someone.

    The Live Help (bottom left) is not clickable. Is it suppose to?

    The quote on the bottom. If you really want a personal quote, try another spot on your webpage.

    Your "GBook". Do something about it. =/


    Those are something I would make few changes on.

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    i agree that your slogan has something odd about it.. Not sure what either, though.

    Overall, your web site looks great. Professional, Smooth, Elegant! But in my opinion, you should change the header around so the "CREATION AGE" doesnt stand out so much..

    Also, why do all your links navigate to a different URL.. http://x3mart.host.sk/crag/

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    Senior Member cbor's Avatar
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    My only suggestion is that you use some anti-aliasizing in photoshop, cuz ur banner text is jagged and some other images
    regards,
    robc

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    overall, pretty good.. the jagged header is caused by using the wrong image height in the HTML code - looks much better when i copied the image into photoshop.

    i don't like the strap line text either. if you are going to keep it, i'd consider a slight rephrase - something like 'more interetsing ideas, everyday'.

    also got a script error - using a pretty standard IE6 set up, "Access is denied on line 3, character 462".

    good luck!

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    Thank ya all.
    I'll change a text line.
    All link are poining to a different URL cuz my dns is not set up yet.

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    also LINVE HELP will woork soon

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    I agree your slogan doesn't sound right, but its not helping that there's a typo in it. At the moment it says "interetsing"

    Nice site.

    PS. How come the previous work in your portfolio was done for practically nothing? Was that to build up a portfolio?
    Regards
    Stephen Gilmour

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    You've changed your motto - its better now, but the speeling error needs to be corrected, then I think the motto is better.
    justlivyalife - The future depends on what we do in the present. (Mahatma Gandhi)
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    Senior Member splufdaddy's Avatar
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    Your site looks nice, although in mozilla firebird, your image breaks out of your site (see attached screenshot), and the rollovers for the nav don't work.

    Also, I'd go over the grammar on your site, it could use a little bit of work. Some of the content is worded akwardly, and sounds funny.

    Nice work, welcome to WDF.


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