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    Junior Member Taco's Avatar
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    Question Please review my website

    Just wanting some opinions thanks. This is my second site. Ohio Bankruptcy Attorney | Chapter 7 & 13 Lawyer | Karrie Mae Southern Law Office

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    Here's my take on it...I'm not crazy about the look and feel, but I don't evaluate primarily on look and feel. There are a lot of pretty picture drawers out there who can do a much better job of that than I can.

    I evaluate primarily on the content itself, and I think yours would need to be adjusted. It's too generic...as in I don't see specifically why anyone would choose your wife over any other bankruptcy attorney. You need to tailor it more to the services she offers and any unique selling proposition she has.

    You also want to avoid it sounding like "SEO copy". If anyone can conclusively identify it as "SEO copy", you haven't written it properly. That means things like "Ohio Bankruptcy Attorney" in title tags in an inorganic manner.

    Having not done any keyword research on your terms, I would suggest you focus more on Cincinnati/Columbus in your copy and as far as your target market. Larger urban centres tend to generate more searches and interest than smaller cities, and counties generally don't. Mind you, if you pick up anything from a smaller city, it's almost automatic business because most people don't bother. But you want to skew your copy organically more toward Cincinnati and Columbus.
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    keep it up like it

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    The website is simple but gives a clear message and accessibility is good.

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    Thanks I appreciate it.


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